(5th meeting) Reconvened concluding session of the Ad Hoc Committee to Elaborate a Comprehensive International Convention on Countering the Use of Information and Communications Technologies for Criminal Purposes
31 Jul 2024 10:00h - 13:00h
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Progress and Debate at the Ad Hoc Committee’s Concluding Session on Cybercrime Convention
During the resumed concluding session of the Ad Hoc Committee on Wednesday, 31st July 2024, the Chair opened the meeting by noting the progress made on Article 17 and the request from the Group for Linguistic Consistency to send each adopted article or part of an article to them immediately. The Secretariat announced informal consultations on Articles 14, 16, and 17, and the Chair directed the Committee to continue with Article 21, focusing on the pending paragraphs 2 and 4, which were subsequently adopted ad referendum.
The Chair then addressed Article 22, which concerns jurisdiction. A debate ensued over subparagraph D of paragraph 2, which deals with unclear jurisdiction in ICT systems. Despite some concerns, the Committee agreed on subparagraph D and the article as a whole, ad referendum. Iran requested an amendment to Article 21.5, which was accepted without objection.
The Committee proceeded to review various articles, adopting many paragraphs ad referendum. However, some articles required further consultation due to disagreements or requests for clarification. Notably, Articles 45 and 46, which involve real-time data collection and interception of content data, were set aside for further discussion due to the contentious choice between the words “shall” and “may.” Iran opposed the compromise term “shall endeavour,” but Norway and Paraguay accepted it as a middle ground. The Committee also set aside some paragraphs linked to Article 40, paragraph 22, which was still under informal consultation.
The multi-stakeholders, including representatives from the Cyber Society Foundation, Microsoft, Cybersecurity Tech Accord, Alliance of NGOs on Crime Prevention and Criminal Justice, and ICC, expressed concerns about the Convention. They highlighted issues such as the broad scope of criminalization, potential human rights violations, lack of safeguards against government abuse, and the risks to data privacy and fundamental rights. They called for the deletion of certain articles, the inclusion of robust safeguards, and a focus on serious cyber-dependent criminal offenses.
The Chair concluded the morning session by acknowledging the progress made and the work still required on the remaining articles and paragraphs. The Committee adjourned until the afternoon, with plans to address preventive measures, technical assistance, mechanisms of implementation, and final provisions. The Chair also noted the importance of multi-stakeholder input, despite the criticism received in the press, and scheduled further informal consultations to resolve outstanding issues.
Session transcript
Chair:
Good morning, everybody. Excellencies, ladies and gentlemen. It’s Wednesday, the 31st of July, 2024, and we have seven days left to finish our work. And the fifth meeting in the resumed concluding session for the Ad Hoc Committee to elaborate a convention to counter the use of information and communications technologies for conventional purposes. So, without further ado, I’ll just remind you that yesterday we had stopped at Article 17. Luckily, we were able to adopt a part of the article, which was pending, so we finished off Article 17. Upon the request of the Group for Linguistic Consistency, I would just ask the Secretariat to immediately send each article or part of article which is adopted at referendum so they can make progress with their work, and we can adopt the convention next week, I hope. So I’ll ask you to do that. I’ll give the floor now to the Secretariat for an announcement on the various meetings now.
Secretariat :
Thank you, Madame Chair. The Secretariat would like to inform delegates that the Nigerian Vice-Chair will convene informals on Article 17. Article 14 and 16 from 11 in CRE this morning. Delegates are also reminded that the open-ended informals is currently taking place in conference room one on the provisions announced by Madam Chair yesterday. Thank you, Madam Chair.
Chair:
Merci. Thank you. Thank you. So conference room E is in the corridor perpendicular to the cafe, which is on the same level as our room here, for those who might not know it. For the consultations on articles 14 and 16 with the Vice-Chair, George Malia of Nigeria. Zimbabwe, I see that you are asking for the floor.
Zimbabwe:
Good morning, Madam Chair. May you defer our taking of the floor. The head of delegation is not yet here.
Chair:
Très bien. Good, yes. So you can request the floor at that time. There’s no problem at all. And we will continue with our work with article 21. Prosecution adjudication sanctions. Only paragraphs 2 and 4 are still pending. Is the committee ready to adopt paragraph 2 as it appears in the current updated draft text? So paragraph 2 of article 21. Are you ready to adopt Paragraph 2 of Article 21? I see no requests for the floor. Everything good? Can we say adopted? Good, adopted. Add referendum, of course. So Secretariat, to the Linguistic and Seherence Group, please. So on to Paragraph 4. Secretariat, Paragraph 4 of Article 21 still. Can the Committee adopt that Paragraph, add referendum? Are you ready to agree on that? Any objections? No? Very good, thank you very much. Agreed, add referendum then. Article 22, jurisdiction. As it appeared in the previous version without any amendment at the closing session, I just need to recall what happened during that closing session and why it was not adopted then. So during that meeting, a number of Member States expressed their concerns on Paragraph D of Paragraph 2 of Article 22. And you have that up on the screen. Others asked for it to be maintained. We wish to note that the principle of territoriality in subparagraph A of Paragraph 1 of Article 22 does not require. that the infringement be entirely committed within the territory of a state for this state to be considered to have jurisdiction. Therefore, the principle of territoriality was used to ensure that jurisdiction applied for offences committed by persons who were not within the territory of a state, but which had an impact within that territory. Subparagraph D of paragraph 2, though, could apply to situations where, because of specificities within an ICT system, the rules of international law governing the jurisdiction of a state are not clear. So, for example, when criminals intercept government data of a state which is stocked on servers in a different state or in a cloud, the link with the territory of the state affected or its nationals is not always clear. And it’s worth noting as well that this provision is not aimed to govern issues of international peace and security, which certain delegations referred to within the concept of cyber security. This question concerns acts described in article 7217 of the Convention, which would fall under the responsibility of member states, as was underscored by a number of delegations. As a convention of criminal justice, though, and I repeat, this is a criminal justice convention, and the aim is, therefore, to combat cyber crime by prohibiting certain behaviours by physical persons, rather than to regulate the behaviour of members. the States. Following this update, these explanations, can the Ad Hoc Committee agree on subparagraph D of paragraph 2 of Article 22 and therefore agree on it at referendum as a whole? Iran is asking for the floor.
Iran:
Thank you, Madam Chair. I take the floor for our observation regarding the 21.5, because I raised it and it was not noticed. We would like to propose before the international obligation the word applicable, consistent with applicable international obligation. Thank you.
Chair:
Is the Committee ready to agree on this proposal by Iran, on this detail? I think this is, this doesn’t have any consequences, this matter of detail by Iran and it could be agreed upon, I think. Is that okay? Could you repeat and then the Secretariat will note it, please, pursuant to your request, Iran.
Iran:
Line before international obligation, the word applicable to be added in the text. Thank you.
Chair:
Okay. Very good. So, we adopt that with that addition of the word. Thank you very much. And please don’t hesitate to request the floor if we’re perhaps going too fast for you and you don’t need to explain that you press the button and we didn’t see you. Quite simply, everyone has the right at any moment, we are here, and I repeat that, I am entirely ready to listen to each and every one of you right to the end, and you have every right to do so. You’re the Member States and you have the right to go back if you’re not entirely happy or entirely convinced. So, thank you very much. Moving ahead, I’ll come back then to my Article 22. Can we adopt Paragraph D of Paragraph 2 and therefore Article 22 as a whole, is that okay? Okay, Secretariat. Approved ad referendum. Thank you. We have taken note of the various opinions expressed on this whole section. Thank you very much. For the multi-stakeholders, I will give you the floor at the end of this morning on the various parts that we are going to consider during this morning’s meeting. So, thank you very much to the Vice-Chair on behalf of Nigeria, and best of luck in your consultations, and anyone who is interested in Articles 14 and 16, you can see him at 11 a.m. in CRE. We’ll move on now to procedural measures and law enforcement and international cooperation. I asked Ms Brioni, I don’t know if the Secretariat has contacted her, I asked Ms Brioni, I don’t know if the Secretariat has contacted her. to join us at the podium because she is the one that led the informal consultations on this section. But I think that perhaps she’s going to join us a little bit later. Thank you very much, Georges. See you later and best of luck. So we’ll continue to follow the same working method as previously. That is to say we’ll go over all of the provisions of these two chapters that are still pending and we will invite the committee to approve the largest possible number, I hope, at referendum. If you have any objections on the current wording of a particular provision, you can signal that by requesting the floor. But once again, I would like to remind you that we are at the decision-making phase now. And so if you have a strong objection, take the floor, request the floor and say quite simply, I cannot accept this word or this part of a sentence. And then above all, just as Yvonne did earlier, propose the addition or proposal or the wording that you would like to see included so that the committee can accept it or not. That’s how we’re going to proceed. We absolutely no longer have time for lengthy explanations. We have heard all of the positions during these sessions and the concluding session. And now we need to make headway. So I’m going to stop speaking now. Article 23. Scope of procedural measures. Paragraph 4 is being reviewed in an informal format. But the rest of the article remains pending with the exception of paragraph 4. 4. No change, no amendment has been made to the updated draft text. Can the Ad Hoc Committee approve Article 23 ad referendum, paragraphs 1, 2, 3 and 4, which remains pending? And welcome to Briony.
Iran:
Thank you, Madam Chair. For the sake of saving time, I would like to propose deletion of the word specific in the first paragraph of Article 23, before the criminal investigation is specific to be deleted. Thank you.
Chair:
European Union, please.
European Union:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We oppose the deletion and would like to keep the text as it is. Thank you.
Chair:
Canada. Canada.
Canada:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We would also like to keep this open and reserve until we see what happens to the negotiations in the other room on key components that are linked to the scope. Thank you.
Chair:
Okay. Thank you. I’ll give the floor to the Russian Federation, Lebanon and Norway, and then we’ll stop because there are requests from Canada to wait for the end of the negotiations in the other room. Russia.
Russian Federation:
Good morning, Madam Chair. We would also prefer to delete. the word specific from Paragraph 1.
Chair:
Thank you. Lebanon, please.
Lebanon:
Good morning. Actually, we oppose the proposition of Iran and Russia because I think that we should specify that it’s a specific criminal investigation because we are talking about a criminal justice treaty. And thank you.
Chair:
Thank you very much. Norway.
Norway:
Thank you, Madam Chair, and good morning, everyone. We would also like to keep the wording specific. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you very much. As Canada requested, asking for us to wait for the results of the informal consultations, we will stop the discussion on these paragraphs 1, 2, 3 and 4 of Article 23 and we will therefore move on to Articles 25 to 28, which were approved, agreed at referendum, leaving Article 29, real-time collection of traffic data. Article 29. There was no amendment made to this article in the updated draft text. Does the Ad Hoc Committee approve of Article 29 as it figures in the draft text on the screen? Any requests for the floor? No. Can we approve? Secretariat, please approve this at referendum. Article 30, interception of content data. In the updated draft text, this article was also not amended. Does the Ad Hoc Committee approve Article 30 ad referendum? Nobody has any objections? Perfect. Secretariat agreed ad referendum. Article 31 to 33 have been agreed ad referendum. We will therefore move on to Article 34, Assistance to and Protection of Victims. Paragraphs 4 to 6 are still pending and no changes have been made to the updated draft text. Are we ready to agree those paragraphs ad referendum? Paragraphs 4 and 6 of Article 34. Those are the two parts of this Article 34 that have not yet been approved. Paragraphs 4, 5 and 6. OK, can we approve?
Iran:
Thank you Madam Chair and sorry to take the floor again. In the end of the first line, the phrase take steps. We would like to delete take steps in these six paragraphs. Thank you.
Chair:
Does the Committee accept this small amendment? The European Union please.
European Union:
Thank you Madam Chair. We would prefer to keep the original text. Thank you.
Chair:
Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much.Oman. Okay, we will leave Paragraph 6 to one side and we will agree Paragraphs 4 and 5, is that okay? Moving forward then, Paragraphs 4 and 5 agreed at referendum and we’ll leave Paragraph 6 for broader consultations, particularly between the European Union and Iran. Thank you very much. Article 36, Protection of Personal Data. This article picks up the proposal from the coordinator of the informal consultations that have been going on since the 6th session of the Ad Hoc Committee and our dear Vice President Ms. Briney from Australia. I have made no amendments to that proposal in the updated draft text. We therefore have Paragraphs 1, 2 and 3 of Article 36. That is on the screen. And it was considered at length during the informal consultations. Are we ready to adopt these Paragraphs 1, 2 and 3 of Article 36 at referendum, of course? Russia.
Russian Federation:
Thank you very much for giving me the floor. We have a question on Paragraph 3 of this article. We are not prepared to adopt it in its current wording. We support the previous wording of this paragraph, the drafting of the wording of the chair of the 6th session that was presented at the beginning of the 7th session, where it said that this sort of data can be handed over to third countries and international organizations with written consent. During the informal consultations on this article, that obligation was deleted from the text. During the seventh session, our delegation doesn’t have an understanding of the position of other delegations on this matter from the informal consultations, but we think that we need to set a high level of the protection of personal data. Of course, this was adopted in the interest of the coordinator of the discussions of this article, and we note that paragraph one of the article says that a state party is recommended to conclude bilateral or multilateral agreements in order to facilitate the transfer of personal data. In that regard, integration associations have the right to establish easier conditions for themselves for the transfer of personal data, and therefore we propose returning to the previous drafting of this paragraph three, where it referred to written authorization. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you. We will then leave paragraph three for broader consultations. Paragraphs one and two are accepted. Does everybody accept paragraphs one and two? So, we accept paragraphs one and two, agreed at referendum in article 36, and paragraph three remains to one side for the time being. And I will ask our dear Vice-Chair, that has already coordinated the informal consultations, to please agree to continue making the necessary efforts to reach consensus on this paragraph three of article 36. Secretariat, you’re following, right? Just so that we’re not in any error when it comes to the final presentation of all of this. Article 37. Extradition. We still have paragraphs 4, 15, 18 and 19 that are pending. And no changes have been made compared to the previous version of the draft text. So we need to consider the pending paragraphs one by one. Paragraph 4 of Article 37. Are you ready to accept it? There are no objections. Very good. Approved at referendum. Paragraph 15. Are there any objections? Approved at referendum. Paragraph 18. Approved at referendum. Paragraph 19. All OK? Approved at referendum. Secretariat, please send each of the paragraphs that are agreed at referendum, please send them to the Language Consistency Group so that we can make progress. Thank you very much. Article 38. Transfer of Sentenced Persons. This provision was already agreed in informal consultations that were held during the closing session. Can we consider that the Ad Hoc Committee approves Article 38 at referendum? OK. Russia. Good morning, Madam Chair. On 38, we don’t have any questions. We fully agree with it, but I would like to go back to Article 27. We agreed that article. I’d like to clarify. We do have a comment on it. Please go ahead, says the Chair. But I would remind you that if you have an objection to a few words or parts or all of the text, you need to present a proposal, a counter-proposal, so that the Committee can decide. Thank you very much. Russia. Microphone for Russia, please. Thank you.
Russian Federation:
On Article 27, the Russian Federation is concerned by the fact that the provision of Paragraph A of Article 27 still contains a certain degree of risk of it possibly being used for unilateral cross-border access by the authorities of one state to data stored on the territory of another state without invoking the procedure of legal assistance or law enforcement cooperation by turning to the person under whose disposition that data is stored, whose nature and legal status of that person are in no way limited. In that regard… the Russian delegation proposes introducing into this paragraph of Article 27 a clarification, namely, to add to paragraph A, after the words electronic data storage medium, the words located on its territory. And I’ll repeat once again, to add to paragraph A, after the words electronic data storage medium, the words located on its territory. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you very much. I didn’t interrupt you, but here, today, we are only considering the articles and part of articles that are still pending. Now, Article 27 was agreed at referendum. We will come back to Article 27 in the plenary when we go back over the entire text. So, please, I would like to make progress so that we can exclusively look at the articles or paragraphs that are still pending. And when I say Article 34, paragraphs 3 and 4, that’s precisely what we need to be considering because there are consultations, informal consultations, taking place in another room. There are two taking place at the same time, in fact. So, the people who are here have instructions pertaining to those parts that are still pending and only to that. So, I hope that you understand, and I would like to ask each and every one of you to not go back over articles that have already been agreed at referendum. We will come back to that when we consider the entire text, and you will then have an opportunity to explain or to propose your amendment. So, we were on Article 37 on extradition. I apologize, Article 38, transfer of sentenced persons. And I was just saying that Article 38 was agreed in informals that took place during the closing session and that I haven’t added or removed or changed anything in the updated draft text. Does the Ad Hoc Committee approve Article 38 ad referendum? Yes? Secretariat, please note that Article 38 is agreed ad referendum. Article 39, transfer of criminal proceedings. Only Paragraph 1 is still pending and no amendment has been made. Can the Ad Hoc Committee approve Paragraph 1 of Article 39 ad referendum? Paragraph 1 was the only part of this Article 39 that had not yet been approved. Are we prepared to approve it ad referendum? Yes? Very good, thank you very much. Secretariat, please note that. Article 40, general principles and procedures relating to mutual legal assistance. The situation is as follows. The majority of the paragraphs in this Article are still pending and only three were subject to agreement in informals. This Article is worded in the same way as in the new updated draft text of the Convention with one addition, namely Paragraph 22. which is the subject of informal consultations. So, we will go through this article paragraph by paragraph, for those paragraphs that have not yet been agreed. So, we will begin with paragraph 1, which was agreed in informals, but which needs to be agreed formally and officially in the committee. Paragraph 1 of article 40. Is it okay? Can we keep it? Agreed at referendum. Thank you very much. Paragraph 2. I remind you that we are currently examining the paragraphs one by one in article 40. So, paragraph 2. Is that okay? Approved at referendum. Paragraph 3. Are there any comments or objections? Iran.
Iran:
Thank you, Madam Chair. In the paragraph 3 of this article, we would like to propose after the subparagraph L, removal of the phrase, removal of criminal content. Thank you.
Chair:
Could you repeat that, please? Microphone for Iran, please.
Iran:
Paragraph L. We would like to propose removal of criminal content.
Chair:
Does the committee accept that amendment from Iran? Okay, we can keep that. The European Union, Switzerland, the United States and then Canada. European Union.
European Union:
Thank you, Madam Chair. No, we do oppose that amendment. We would like to retain the text as it is. We believe it’s been subject to very lengthy discussions and establishes a good balance. Thank you.
Chair:
La Suisse. Switzerland.
Switzerland:
Thank you, Madam Chair. Same goes with Switzerland, what was just said by the EU. Thank you.
Chair:
Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much. The United States of America.
United States:
Thank you, Madam Chair. The same also for the United States. We would oppose Iran’s proposal. Thank you.
Chair:
Très bien. Very good. Albania, please.
Albania:
Thank you, Chair. Also, we like to oppose it to retain the text as it is. Thank you.
Chair:
La Côte d’Ivoire. Côte d’Ivoire.
Côte d’Ivoire:
We would like to keep the text. Thank you very much.
Chair:
It seems that there is no agreement to your proposal, Iran. Therefore, we will keep Paragraph 3 as it is currently in the updated draft text unless Iran is firmly opposed. Iran.
Iran:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We have a reservation about this issue. Thank you.
Chair:
Très bien. Merci beaucoup. Very good. Thank you very much. Paragraph 4. Can we approve Paragraph 4? Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 5. of Article 40, Paragraph 5. Are there any objections to the current text? Approved at referendum. Paragraph 6. Can we approve it? Is it all OK? Paragraph 6 is approved at referendum. Paragraph 7. OK, agreed at referendum. Paragraph 8. Can we agree to that? Is that OK? Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 9. Can the committee agree to this at referendum? Is that OK? Secretariat, please note, agreed at referendum. Paragraph 10. OK. Thank you very much. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 11. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 12. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 13. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 14. Paragraph 15. E, F and G were agreed in informals. Are we ready to agree to the entire paragraph now? Paragraph 15. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 16. Is that all okay? Is the committee ready to agree to that? Yes. Approved at referendum. Paragraph 17. Is the committee ready to agree at referendum? Yes. Good. Thank you. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 18. Paragraph 18. Approved. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 19. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 20. C’est bon? That’s good. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 21. Okay. Alors. So, dear Bryony, and I’d like to thank her very much for all her work throughout this session. It’s thanks to you that we are being able to agree this at referendum, so thank you for all your efforts. So, like paragraph 21, there is a country who has requested further informal consultations, Costa Rica, so I’d like to give them the floor.
Costa Rica:
Thank you, Madam Chair. On 21, we don’t have any objection to agreeing on it, to its adoption, but we are just working and negotiating for an addition to 21, some political offences, as we said in the plenary. So, we are continuing to work on that in order to propose it with enough support to the Bureau when we get back to plenary. But we just wanted to say we’re not against 21 per se, but we are asking for it to remain pending because we have a proposal on an addition for an extra sub-paragraph within it. Thank you.
Chair:
The Chair, thank you very much, Costa Rica. We will take account of that, as we have for other delegations, so paragraph 21 is just put aside for now until those informal consultations are completed on it. Paragraph 22 is also, there are also informal discussions ongoing on that, so we’ll leave it aside. Paragraph 23. Paragraph 23. Agreed at referendum. Paragraph 24 Agreed at referendum Paragraph 25 Is the committee ready to adopt this? Yes Agreed at referendum Paragraph 26 Can we agree on that? Agreed at referendum Paragraph 27 Are we ready to agree? Yes I see no objections, so agreed at referendum Paragraph 28 Agreed at referendum Paragraph 29 Are we ready? Yes? It seems so. Agreed at referendum Paragraph 30 Agreed at referendum Paragraph 31 Agreed at referendum And finally, paragraph 32 Agreed at referendum we have been able to agree quite a number of paragraphs in Article 40, almost all of them in fact, for Article 40. So, we can move on to Article 41 on the 24-7 network. No amendments have been made to this article in the updated draft text. Can the Ad Hoc Committee agree on this article? So, Article 41, 24-7 network. New Zealand. I was going to present the paragraphs, but New Zealand, you can take the floor.
New Zealand:
Thank you, Madam Chair. If we could please go to Paragraph 3, sub-para C. We would like to suggest a small technical edit here to be more specific and consistent re-language. So, can we please suggest deletion of collection of evidence, comma, the. So, that would leave in that sub-para the provision of legal information and we would add on the collection of evidence, or. So, it would read, the provision of legal information on the collection of evidence, or. Then we would propose a C, bis, the locating of suspects, or. So, to repeat, it would be a C, alt, the provision of legal information on the collection of evidence, or, then a C, bis, the locating of suspects, or. Thank you, Madam Chair.
Chair:
The committee has heard the proposal by New Zealand. Are we ready to agree on that? Paraguay, please.
Paraguay:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We need to analyze that proposal on New Zealand. And we just wanted to suggest something for paragraph 2, and ask the Secretariat to notify the contact points, once again. So that would be at the end, and we’ll notify annually the state parties of the updated contact points at the end of that paragraph. So that was all, thank you.
Chair:
Yes, so we have two proposals, one from New Zealand in paragraph 3, and one from Paraguay in paragraph 2. I suggest that we start by the proposal of Paraguay in paragraph 2, who is asking for this to be done on an annual basis. And you heard the proposal. Can we add that extra precision in paragraph 2 from Paraguay? Iran, and then Russia, please. I would just like you first to talk about the proposal from Paraguay, and then we’ll come back to the one from New Zealand after that. Iran, you have the floor.
Iran:
The intervention is regarding the proposal by New Zealand. We prefer the original language. Thank you.
Chair:
So, on the proposal from Paraguay, are there any reactions? They are just asking for annually to be added, I just recall. Russia, is this on Paraguay’s suggestion? No. So I was asking for the reactions to Paraguay’s suggestion first. Can the committee accept that? Yes? So paragraph 2 has that addition made to it on an annual basis. So the secretariat is asking for a few moments to just draft that and do it according to the normal procedure. So that’s okay, but I note that basically we do agree with that addition on an annual basis or annually or not. The U.S., is this on Paraguay? If so, you have the floor.
United States:
Thank you, Madam Chair. From the U.S. perspective, we believe that this paragraph is really an administrative paragraph and that parties can update as needed, so perhaps not necessarily on an annual basis. Thank you.
Chair:
Merci. Thank you. Paraguay? Do you understand the concern? Oui. Le Paraguay. Yes. Paraguay, then. Could Paraguay have the floor, please?
Paraguay:
Yes. I do understand that. to notify everybody annually about the updated list, not the countries. So the idea is for an annual circulation of the list of contact points by the Secretariat to the States’ Parties and not the States’ Parties to the Secretariat. So there would be an addition at the end of paragraph 2, saying, and will annually notify the States’ Parties of the updated list of points of contact. That’s our proposal.
Chair:
So if I correctly understood the U.S., though, they were saying perhaps this could even be done every six months since this is an administrative procedure. But I don’t know if that really changes very much if we add annually. The idea is that it could be done perhaps several times a year, this update, rather than having to wait for a whole year to go by, if I correctly understood what the U.S. was saying. U.S., are you strongly against the addition of annual basis? We could, administratively, of course, change or update it every six months or three months as well. The United States. Floor to the United States, please.
United States:
Thank you, Madam Chair. Having heard Paraguay’s proposal and understanding that it would be the Secretary General sending out the notification to the contact points, we are okay with their proposed addition of the annual basis in their language. Thank you.
Chair:
Good. So, in principle, we agree. The Secretariat will just contact Paraguay to check exactly on the wording, and we will come back to paragraph 2 with the idea that we do almost all agree on paragraph 2 with the small addition from Paraguay. Paragraph 3. So, you’ve heard the proposal from New Zealand. We have already heard from Iran, who is against that. Russia is asking for the floor.
Russian Federation:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We don’t really understand the point of New Zealand’s proposal, the meaning of this, of changing this paragraph, because the 24-7 network is created in order to carry out one of the functions of this network, which is the collection of evidence. But providing legal information is something that we can already do in the framework of other paragraphs, as well as the way it’s written now. So we would suggest leaving this paragraph as it is currently worded.
Chair:
So we will leave paragraph three aside for further consultation on this proposal from New Zealand. It’s a minor addition, but which will require further examination. So we will move on to paragraph four, which has been agreed at referendum already, then paragraph five. We’re still on article 41, 24-7 network. Paragraph five. Agreed at referendum. Egypt, please.
Egypt:
Thank you, Madam Chair. Good morning, dear colleagues. I just wonder, Madam Chair, whether we had agreed at referendum on paragraph one of this article?
Chair:
Not yet, because I presented the whole article. We’ve had comments on paragraphs two and three. So far we’re on paragraph five. now so but we are working on paragraph 1 before we go to 5. Is that okay Egypt? Agreed at referendum then. Thank you. Egypt. Paragraph 5. Agreed? Yes. Agreed at referendum then. Paragraph 6. United Kingdom.
United Kingdom:
Thank you Madam Chair. With apologies on paragraph 1 of this article the United Kingdom would like to reserve pending the outcome of informals. Thank you.
Chair:
Paragraph 1 is not agreed at referendum upon the request of the United Kingdom. Paragraph 2, we have the addition from Paraguay which should be acceptable but we’re just waiting for the Secretariat to submit the final text to us. Paragraph 3, we will require further consultation on that one. Paragraph 4 has been agreed at referendum. Paragraph 5 as well and now we’re on paragraph 6. Is that okay? Can we agree on that? Agreed at referendum then. And we’ve finished with article 41. We can move on to article 42. International cooperation for the purpose of expedited preservation of stored electronic data. A number of provisions here are still pending and I’ve made just three. changes. Firstly, in paragraph 6 of article 42, I’ve added a new reference to the provisions on non-discrimination in paragraph 22 of article 40 of this updated draft convention text as a further reason for refusal of legal assistance. But this paragraph 22 is also already put aside for further informal consultations itself. Secondly, the expression at the beginning of paragraph 6, in addition, has been added for reasons of form because paragraph 5 is also about grounds for refusal of legal assistance. Then in paragraph 9, I’ve replaced, I’ve used the word period. This is a correction because the previous paragraph 8 of article 42 of the original draft text of the convention provided for a maximum period of preservation, which has been modified into a minimum period of preservation in the revised draft text of the convention before the closing session. So, I suggest that we consider the paragraphs one by one except paragraph 6, which is linked to paragraph 22 of article 40, which has not yet been agreed and where informal consultations are happening. So, we’ll go through the paragraphs of article 42 one by one, starting with paragraph 1. Article 42, paragraph 1. Is that agreed? Agreed at referendum then. Paragraph two. Not yet agreed. Algeria.
Algeria:
Thank you, Madam Chair. Just a small observation regarding paragraph six on, I mean, paragraph six on article 42. Just a remark to the Secretary that the version in English that we have the edits adding the paragraph 22, but the version in other languages, mainly French, we don’t have it. So that’s if the Secretary can reflect these amendments that have been on the English version on the other versions. Thank you, Madam Chair.
Chair:
Thank you very much for your comment, Algeria. Secretary, the necessary corrections should be made, please. But I just remind you, Algeria, that paragraph six is placed aside and will be looked at alongside paragraph 22 of article 40. They’re linked. Paragraph two. Can we agree on that? Yes. So agreed at referendum. Paragraph three. Here, I remind you that the chapeau and subparagraph B are still pending. The other subparagraphs have already been agreed at referendum. So we have the chapeau and subparagraph B under paragraph three of article 42. That’s what remains to be agreed upon. Is that OK? Are we able to agree on them now? Agreed at referendum, then. Paragraph four has already been agreed at referendum. We can move on to paragraph five. Agreed. Add referendum. Paragraph 6, we’re leaving aside. Paragraph 7. Can we agree on that? Agreed. Add referendum. Paragraph 8. Agreed. Add referendum. Paragraph 9. Paraguay, please.
Paraguay:
Thank you, Madam Chair. Here, we have a proposal. There is no establishment of a time for the extension of the preservation period, and we would suggest adding how much the extension would be, 90 days, 60 days. So we talk about a period of preservation, but the extension is not laid out. So we would say the same time, 90 days, but we are open to other proposals, but we would just like to specify the period. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you. You are right. We haven’t yet decided on the period of preservation, so we will leave Paragraph 9 aside until we decide upon the period of preservation. In that case, we’ve finished with Article 42. Article 43 now, international cooperation for the purpose of expedited disclosure of preserved traffic data. So here, only Paragraph 2 remains pending. And the only amendment I’ve made to this is the addition of a reference to paragraph 22 of Article 40 as a further grounds for refusal. As we did for paragraph 6 of Article 42, we will also leave this aside for now, this paragraph 2, because it too is linked to the agreement on paragraph 22 of Article 40. Article 44. Mutual legal assistance in accessing stored electronic data. Only paragraph 1 remains to be agreed at referendum. The other paragraphs are already agreed. This is Article 44. Mutual legal assistance in accessing stored electronic data. Can we agree on paragraph 1? Yes? Agreed at referendum. Article 45. Mutual legal assistance in the real-time collection of traffic data. And Article 46. Mutual legal assistance in the interception of content data. We will look at these two together. As you know, in the closing session, there were persistent differences between Member States about the use in English of the word shall. This is an obligation, or the word may, which is a possibility. And there were lengthy discussions and we did not make a decision. Paragraphs 1 and 2 of Article 45 and paragraph 1 of Article 46 of the current draft text of the Convention take into account a proposal made by a Member State during the informal consultations. held in Vienna in April 2024. I chaired these informal consultations in Vienna myself, and we discussed these paragraphs 1 and 2 of Article 45. Rather than using wording with obligation or possibility, it was suggested that instead, and I’ll say this in English with my bad accent, I apologize. So this is a semi-obligation, shall endeavor, by way of compromise. And this confers upon the Member State an obligation and requiring of them that they will do their very best, they will strive to provide mutual legal assistance for real-time collection of traffic data and for the interception of content data, without prejudice to the result of the internal examination of this request or obligation to provide legal assistance in all circumstances. So, having heard those explanations, can the Committee agree to Articles 45 and 46 at referendum? We have, I see, Iran.
Iran:
Thank you, Madam Chair, for giving the floor to me. This article is an important article and the addition of new proposals in Paragraph 1 and 2 of the Article 45 has watered down this obligation for provision of mutual legal assistance in real-time collection. So we prefer removing Endeavor 2 in Paragraph 1 and 2. Thank you.
Chair:
Could you please repeat, so that the Secretariat can note that?
Iran:
Article 45, we propose, because the new addition, I mean Endeavor 2 in both Paragraph 1 and 2 has made the obligations, you know, watered down the obligations. in this important article. So we propose deletion of this new proposal in paragraph 1 and 2. Thank you.
Chair:
Iran, I recall that we had to decide between shall on one side and may on the other. So we need a solution and I chose an intermediary solution, intermediate solution. So we do need to think of coming up with an actual solution. Norway, please.
Norway:
Thank you, Chair. Our preference has been may, but we can accept shall and never. We will not accept only shall. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you. I fear that we’re going to spend a very long time again on the preferences between shall and may and I honestly think that my proposal, I mean I’m not firmly attached to my own text, I prefer for the committee to decide, but I do think that in this case the shall endeavor proposal could resolve this. But of course, Iran, it’s up to you as well. Paraguay.
Paraguay:
Thank you, Chair. We would support Norway’s proposal, the use of may. That’s all I wanted to say. Thank you.
Chair:
The Chair, thank you. Malaysia.
Malaysia:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We have initially agreed for the word may, but in light of compromise, we would prefer to retain the original text of shall and never as proposed by Madam Chair. Thank you.
Chair:
Thank you very much, Malaysia. Is the committee more prepared? Iran, are you really firmly opposed? Because this would allow us to make some progress. Later, thank you. Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much. Okay, we’ll set that to one side and we’ll probably have to have another discussion of it, this issue of between shall and may, and we’ll keep shall and ever, but thank you. So for the time being, we’ll leave 45 and 46 to one side. So Article 47, law enforcement cooperation. Some paragraphs of this article have already been agreed at referendum, while others have been agreed in informals. Once again, we’re going to go through this article paragraph by paragraph, but keeping that in mind. Can I consider that the ad hoc committee approves paragraphs one, the chapeau, and then 1A, which was already agreed in informals, 1F, the other have been, other paragraphs have been agreed at referendum, and also paragraph two. That’s where we stand. The United States, please.
United States:
Thank you, Madam Chair, and apologies as I’d like to return to Article 45. Just to ask a question on paragraph 3C, we’ve noticed the addition or other illegal act and believe it would be helpful to have an explanation of this. It seems that offense, because we have offense there, this addition of other illegal act is not needed. Thank you.
Chair:
Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much. I said that we were going to leave Articles 45 and 46 to one side for the time being, so when the time comes, you will get an explanation of that. Are we ready when it comes to Article 47, following the explanation that several paragraphs have already been agreed at referendum and that the others were agreed in informals? We still have to decide on paragraph one, the chapeau. Paragraph 1A was agreed in informals. Paragraph 1F, all of the others above that were agreed at referendum. And then paragraph two. Are we prepared to accept Article 47 and to conclude this article? I can’t see any objections. So, Secretariat, agreed at referendum for Article 47, please. Article 48, joint investigations. The updated draft text takes into account an amendment that was requested by several member states, namely the addition of a reference to crimes established in accordance with this convention. Offenses established in accordance with this convention in line with the approach adopted throughout the rest of the convention. Since this provision envisages measures that are by their very nature voluntary, I hope that we will also be able to reach an agreement on this article. Following that explanation. Offenses established in accordance with this convention. Is the Committee ready to agree to Article 48? Is that OK? Approved. Add referendum, of course. And that means that it gives you the time to consult your capitals, and then I hope to come back to us with good news. Article 49. Mechanisms for the recovery of property through international cooperation in confiscation. Only the chapeau, paragraph 1 and 1A, are still pending. No changes have been made to this version. Is the Committee ready to agree, add referendum to paragraph 1 and 1A? Do we agree? Article 49 is therefore agreed, add referendum. Article 50. International cooperation for the purposes of confiscation. No changes have been made to this article in the updated draft text. However, paragraph 1, the chapeau, paragraph 1B, paragraph 2 and paragraph 7 are pending. All of the others have already been agreed, add referendum. Can we agree to them now? I repeat, that is paragraph 1, the chapeau, paragraph 1B, paragraph 2 and paragraph 7. Is that okay? We can therefore agree to article 50. Switzerland.
Switzerland:
Thank you, Madam Chair. We would like to briefly go back to Article 45 and 46. As already stated in our first statement, we were ready to consider the proposed language as this is already considerable compromise. We were among those delegations that wanted these articles to be entirely deleted. Hence, we once again want to reiterate here that these measures are very intrusive measures. Thank you for giving me the time to quickly go back to those two articles.
Chair:
Switzerland, as I said, 45 and 46 have been set aside for the time being. So we will have informal consultations on those two articles and at that time you will be able to participate with your proposals on that regard. Is Article 50 approved? Paragraph 1, the chapeau, 1B, 2 and 7. Is that okay? Secretary, please note, agreed at referendum. Article 51, special cooperation. No changes have been made to this article, with the exception of a minor change in format. Can I consider that the Committee agrees to Article 51 as it figures in the updated draft text? Article 51, special cooperation. Are we ready? Agreed at referendum. Article 52. Return and disposal of confiscated proceeds of crime or property. Only paragraph 3 has not yet been agreed and no changes have been made to the updated draft text. Does the committee agree to paragraph 3 and therefore to the entirety of article 52? Paragraph 3 of article 52, Paraguay.
Paraguay:
Thank you, Madam President. So what we proposed was a similar drafting to article 57, paragraph 4 of UNCAD, which reads as follows. When, unless the member state, the state’s party decide otherwise, the requested state party can reduce the costs, the reasonable costs it has carried out in the course of investigations or judicial procedure making the provision of goods possible, pursuant to the provisions of this article. The reason for this is that developing countries have a disproportionate expenditure on transnational criminal organizations. If we are unable to deduct costs for the administration of justice, as we do in internal domestic cases in our country, then this would have a great impact on our budget, because much of this property has, it sometimes has a quite high cost associated with it for maintenance. So, our text as proposed would be very similar to article 57 paragraph 4 of UNCAT. Thank you.
Chair:
Dear colleagues, I don’t think that we all here have paragraph 4 of article 57 of UNCAT before us, so I would propose that we leave this article to one side until such time as all the delegations are able to have the precise text, and I would invite you to send your text to the Secretariat that can then publish it on the site. The text of paragraph 4 of article 57 of UNCAT. I know what you’re talking about, but I also know that not everyone has the same expertise as you when it comes to UNCAT, so we’ll wait until we get the text and can look at it. So, article 52. Well, not all of article 52, it’s just paragraph 3. We’re in agreement on that. So, our dear Vice-Chair, you still have a fair bit to do with those few paragraphs and articles that we’ve set to one side, but I do think we have made progress. I’m very happy because we can see we’re approaching the end goal when it comes to this part, to these articles. So, thank you very much. Now, what time is it? It’s quarter to twelve. We will… I’m going to leave the last part for this afternoon, the part on preventive measures, technical assistance, mechanisms of implementation and final provisions. We’ll look at those this afternoon. For this morning, we will give the floor to the multi-stakeholders to address the parts that we have just considered yesterday and today, of course. For the time being, we have requests for the floor from Cyber Society Foundation, Microsoft and Cyber Security Tech Accord. Thank you very much to the Vice-Chair, and we will inform you in due course of the room where the informals with the Vice-Chair will take place, the representative of Australia, on the paragraphs and articles that we left to one side this morning. So, our partners, the multi-stakeholders that are always very aggressive when it comes to the Chair. And I would just share with you the fact that it really is interesting to note, you can really be proud of yourselves, the multi-stakeholders, because I read a very bad article in the Algerian press that was attacking the Chair because the representatives of the private sector were not happy with the Convention. So, you really do have a big audience, even far from these halls. So, I’ll give you the floor. Cyber Society Foundation.
Cyber Saathi Foundation:
Thank you for giving me this opportunity again. Cyber Sati Foundation would like to reiterate its statement that this convention is very critical to combat cyber crime across jurisdictions. The Cyber Sati Foundation expected the substantive provisions to be a lot more robust than what we have now, while so the ten provisions that form part of the convention are critical additions and are in line with the current global trends. There has been repeated red flagging of issues with respect to possible harm to fundamental rights. We’d like to emphasize that while these red flags may be valid with the reduction of Article 5 that was proposed earlier, Cyber Sati Foundation believes that merely apprehension being the basis cannot form the reason for doubting the rationale of the convention. We are in support of the international cooperation measures that have been proposed. I can speak from the perspective of India in saying that we have faced a lot of delays and concerns in terms of international cooperation, data gathering, and support for prosecutions. And we believe, and I speak in the context of Cyber Sati Foundation of course, we believe that the provisions under the convention would help expedite international cooperation, particularly in prosecutions and in investigations. The addition specifically with respect to capacity building in the convention is much welcome and it shows a forward-thinking process and not merely a reactive process. In brief, Madam Chair, I would like to close with supporting the Convention and also the heartening process we have noticed of very positive movement towards a fruitful closure of the Convention in this session and we really hope that this Convention will come to bear in early days. There are a lot of checks and balances built into the Convention and it has been left to each of the municipal laws to capture the same and surely I believe that the sense of balance that would have to play to ensure fundamental rights are protected, to ensure that individual rights are not violated through surveillance or search and seizure processes without due process will be met by each of the nations. Thank you once again for giving us an opportunity. Thank you very much.
Chair:
Microsoft.
Microsoft:
Thank you for the floor, Madam Chair. We appreciate the opportunity that you are giving to stakeholders even if we are aggressive as you say. At its heart, this treaty still remains a data access global surveillance treaty in the guise of a cybercrime one without adequate safeguards to prevent government abuse of power. As you heard from my colleague yesterday, the current text is for a Convention with a practically limitless scope of criminalization that allows for clandestine access to secure systems, extra-territorial exfiltration of data, secret real-time data collection and inadequate safeguards. After the moving of this morning’s agreed paras, we do not see this moving in a positive direction. The Convention will still encourage privacy intrusions worldwide by allowing states to compel service providers to provide personal information, including real-time data collection in secret without adequate safeguards or accountability. Throughout this process, nearly three years of negotiations, Microsoft has raised the alarm bells on articles that allow for real-time surveillance and related references. We continue to object to these articles, and we support states who have called for the deletion of articles 28, 29, along with all references to them. Additionally, it’s critical that states explicitly provide data custodians may notify individuals whose data is being accessed whenever that would not prejudice an ongoing investigation. Otherwise, individuals will be unable to assert their fundamental rights. This transparency is even more important when dealing with electronic evidence where search and seizure often leaves no physical trace. We reiterate that except in narrow circumstances, the public has a right to know when and why governments seek to gain access to their data. States need to ensure transparency and accountability in the conduct of law enforcement authorities. Secrecy should be the exception rather than the rule. On Article 41, as discussed this morning, we support the Costa Rica proposal for including political offenses as grounds for refusal. However, we object the premise that states can use the 24-7 network to collect evidence, and at a very minimum, we believe that safeguards should apply to this article. We support New Zealand’s proposal for Article 41. We must continue to ask countries of the world, specifically democratic nations, does this treaty meet even the minimum thresholds for you to ratify? And frankly, even if it does, we could still not recommend states sign or ratify a convention with such profound negative impacts on the digital ecosystem.
Chair:
Thank you very much. Microsoft, Cybersecurity Tech Accord.
Cybersecurity Tech Accord:
Thank you very much, Madam Chair. We’ll be brief and say that we support the statement you have just heard from Microsoft, as well as that of the ICC and I suspect the rest of the civil society that will speak after me. With respect to Articles 45 and 46, we don’t believe these should even be retained, let alone made mandatory, and we don’t believe that making them optional greatly helps with addressing the problems that obtain from these, just as we have to say that the adoption of 29 and 30 is a pretty dark moment in this process and takes us a considerable distance away from an agreement that the private sector would find supportable. On 41.1, we have the same issues with respect to the use of the 24-7 network for such an expansive list of activities, and the safeguards article in 24 and the other safeguards provision at a minimum should apply to it, otherwise it should be significantly slimmed down. In that vein, we support the Costa Rican proposal as well as that of New Zealand. Thank you very much.
Chair:
Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much. Alliance of NGOs on Crime Prevention and Criminal Justice.
Alliance of NGOS:
Thank you Madam Chair. Merci Madame la Présidente. Thank you Madam Chair for giving civil society the floor. We appreciate. If ratified, the draft convention in its current state has many vulnerabilities that could be exploited to the detriment of citizens and the private sector. These risks will be evident in national legislation drafting and multilateral cooperation matters. While the current draft convention addresses child sexual abuse material online, it leaves children largely vulnerable to prosecution for dissemination of such material. Ethical hacking, a practice that helps identify vulnerabilities in the cyber infrastructure before they are exploited by bad actors, has yet to be fully protected under the draft convention. The provision on data acquisition by law enforcement from data custodians and the transfer of such data from one jurisdiction to another in the framework of international cooperation would leave citizens vulnerable to human rights violations. We are of the view that the convention should lay out clear boundaries on the data transfer process from data custodians to relevant state actors for investigative purposes. The risks are too high, Madam President, for civil society. We cannot afford a complete reliance on the good faith of state parties to effectively blend this convention provision on data transfer or sharing with other human rights instruments. The convention in its current state lacks provision for reparation for victims of cyber crime. The reference to the reparation is too vague and will be watered down further when it comes to the implementation of such provision. for this week is to see member states and multi-stakeholders come together to address these vulnerabilities and reach consensus on the most poignant ones. Thank you, Madam President.
Chair:
Thank you very much.
R3D:
Thank you, Madam Chair. I will also be brief and I also like to support the other statements made by my colleagues this morning. We are indeed aggressive as a civil society that defends human rights because we care and we want to have the best text that is actually useful to protect a lot of the vulnerable groups that we are trying, that is supposed to protect this specific treaty. But anyways, we regret to see that a lot of the highly intrusive secret spy powers are being adopted in these specific chapters without any robust safeguards. The actual draft allows extensive secret surveillance with weak safeguards, posing significant risks both domestically and internationally. Domestically, it permits real-time interception of traffic data for any crime, while counter-interception is limited to serious crimes, which are offenses punishable only for four years and more in domestic laws. Service providers are compelled to assist in these surveillance activities, often under perpetual gag orders preventing notification, even when investigations are no longer jeopardized. Internationally, the draft allows one state to assist another in carrying out such surveillance for serious crimes, forcing companies to comply with foreign surveillance requests also in perpetual secrecy. This lack of transparency and accountability disabilities are recycled for unchecked abuses of power and undermines trust in digital services. We wanted to see the deletion of Articles 29, 30, 45, and 46. Also we want to support the proposal made by the Costa Rican delegation on Article 41. Also we regret to see that this lawless law enforcement cooperation risks human rights erosion. The current wording of Article 47 risks supporting open-ended law enforcement cooperation without detailing the necessary limitations and safeguards required under international human rights law. States shall not use this convention to authorize or require personal data sharing beyond the scope of existing mutual legal assistance treaties. The safeguards established under the MLA and the MLA vetting mechanism, removing these safeguards without providing comparable protections and limitations, invites misuse of the mutual legal assistance framework for abuse and or repression. So we want to propose to limit, if possible, Article 47, 1, and to only include the application of Article 7 to 11. Thank you so much.
Chair:
Merci beaucoup. Thank you very much. The last speaker on the list is ICC. ICC.
ICC:
Thank you, Madam Chair, and thank you again for the opportunity to share a few comments on behalf of the International Chamber of Commerce, the institutional representative of 45 million companies in over 100 countries. Madam Chair, I’m not sure if we are aggressive, but we are certainly persistent, both in sharing our views and also with agreeing with one another here in the back rows. As I noted yesterday, concerns of the global private sector remain that this convention continues to continue. contain serious flaws, allowing its provisions to be potentially misused to compromise cyber security, data privacy, and fundamental rights and freedoms. The Convention must strike a very delicate balance, and I know this is a hard task, but it must strike a balance to support international cooperation with the law enforcement while effectively protecting human rights, fostering economic development, and ensuring national security. Without significant revisions to the text that we have now, including some of the paragraphs that were adopted at draft today, the current draft risks undermining these critical areas, necessitating a cautious approach from the international community. To help reach this balance, we recommend considering the following revisions. First, focus narrowly on cyber-dependent serious criminal offenses and keep the scope of all provisions of the Convention on offenses established by this Convention. Therefore, we would like to propose to remove references that could broaden the scope of the Convention and its procedural provisions, such as Article 23, Paragraph 2b, and Article 35, Paragraph 1c, as well as references to other crimes in Article 23, Paragraph 2c, Article 40, Paragraph 1, and Article 47, Paragraph 1a. Secondly, we recommend avoiding provisions that could lead to jurisdictional disputes or broad exetorial claims. Therefore, we recommend removing Article 22, Paragraph 2, except for subparagraph b, remove Article 27, Paragraph 1b, and remove Article 28, Paragraph 4. And third and last, we recommend including robust safeguards to protect human rights, ensuring transparency, accountability, and judicial oversight in data access. Therefore, we support wholeheartedly the inclusion of Article 6 and Article 24, and we hope for strengthened language that does not limit the granting of safeguards to domestic law alone. We also hope to see new language in Articles 25 to 28 to recognize that except narrowly defined circumstances, the public has a right to know how governments may access their information. and under what circumstances third parties may be obliged to provide it to public authorities. To allow technology providers an opportunity to challenge demands for data on behalf of their customers, including those based on potential conflicts of law, and ensure legally binding remedies are available to data subjects in the event of a breach of the government access use and attention rules. And last but not least, we would hope to see still the removal of Articles 29 and 32.
Chair:
I’m sorry, the three minutes were up, I’m afraid, so automatically the mic is cut off, but we did understand the gist of what you were saying anyway. As there are now no further names on the list of speakers from the multi-stakeholders, we do still have a bit of time left. I will be suspending the session, adjourning the session very much earlier today. We do have bilateral informals as well, but I just wanted to ask you to check with you whether you had anything to add now. If not, then thank you very much. Have a good lunch break, and we will be back here at 3pm. Don’t forget, Bureau members, that we have a meeting, and then those of you with an appointment with me in the other room, I am at your disposal. Thank you very much, and see you this afternoon at 3 o’clock, when we will continue with the still pending articles and paragraphs.
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New Zealand
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In the revised proposal for Paragraph 3, sub-paragraph C of the document in question, the delegation has proposed a significant adjustment to refine the language used and bring it in line with established terminological standards. They suggest replacing the initial phrase “collection of evidence,” due to its potential ambiguity, with the more precise “on the collection of evidence,” which should follow directly after “the provision of legal information.” This revision aims to reinforce the connection between legal information and evidence collection, thereby enhancing clarity.
Additionally, the delegation has introduced a supplementary sub-point, “C – bis,” which outlines “the locating of suspects” as an independent procedural element. This classification serves to differentiate the informational aspect of evidence handling from the practical investigative step of locating suspects.
The amendments put forth seek to eliminate vagueness and ensure clarity to facilitate interpretation. The delegation’s meticulous approach to the wording provides a detailed portrayal of the procedural components pertinent to the subject matter. The suggested changes underscore an attention to detail and a priority on precision within the text, enhancing the overall coherence and the utility of the document as a guiding resource.
These improvements aim to provide a clear framework for legal information provision and investigative procedures. There is a consensus that the proposed linguistic improvements by the delegation would likely enhance the document’s effectiveness. The amendments mirror the delegation’s dedication to precision and demonstrate an understanding of the vital role of language in ensuring transparent and efficient processes.
To summarise, the delegation’s recommended modifications are expected to streamline the document’s language, ensuring terminological consistency and clarifying procedural guidance within legal and investigative contexts.
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Albania
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During the debate, a participant firmly expressed their opposition to any proposed changes to the current text, advocating for its preservation without modifications. Although the specific reasons for their stance were not detailed in their succinct statement, it suggested that they deemed the existing text adequate or beneficial for their interests or those they represent.
The speaker’s argument lacked detailed evidence or justification, leaving their reasoning open to interpretation. Nonetheless, their decisive manner indicated a strong belief in maintaining the status quo. The speaker concluded with thanks, likely showing respect for the debate’s procedural formalities and acknowledging the chance to voice their opinion.
This gratitude may also signify the end of their allotted speaking time or the completion of their points. This summary encapsulates the essence of the speaker’s contribution to the debate, but it does not provide insight into the full scope of opinions or the overall consensus of the proceedings.
The limited information presents a partial view of what is likely a complex and nuanced discussion.
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Algeria
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During a committee meeting, an astute participant flagged a point of order concerning a discrepancy in the multilingual documentation. They pointed out that paragraph six of Article 42 in the English version, which now includes a new paragraph 22, differed from the French equivalent, indicating that the updates had not been duly reflected in the translations.
The participant underscored the need to ensure coherence across all official language iterations of the document to guarantee that its contents are uniformly understood and applied. They politely requested the Secretary address this inconsistency by aligning all language versions with the English amendments.
Throughout their intervention, they were mindful to express respect, acknowledging the Chair’s adept handling of the discussion, which indicated an unspoken commitment to the precision and clarity of the committee’s documentation. This is imperative for the functionality of the organisation, as disparities could potentially result in misinterpretations or unequal enforcement of the article among different linguistic communities.
The specific reference to paragraph 22 suggests its critical importance, hinting that the amendments made might be significantly relevant to the intended audience of the document. The final plea to the Secretary was succinct and focused on finding a remedy, underlining the urgency of rectifying the mistake.
This approach ensures that all members, across various languages, share an identical understanding of the updated article. In essence, the participant’s contribution echoed an underlying message of inclusiveness and fairness, striving to maintain uniformity across all language versions of the document.
This vigilance in ensuring that every member has access to the same information epitomises the committee’s commitment to thorough linguistic harmony and foregrounds the indispensable role that accurate translations play in upholding the integrity of the organisation’s proceedings.
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Alliance of NGOS
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In expressing her gratitude to the Chair for providing a platform to civil society, the speaker highlights a series of significant vulnerabilities within the current draft of the impending convention. She warns that if ratified in its current guise, the draft contains numerous loopholes that could be exploited, potentially to the detriment of the public and private sectors.
These concerns are especially pronounced in the drafting of national laws and the mechanisms for international cooperation, areas where these weaknesses might be most noticeable. A key issue raised is the convention’s treatment of online child sexual abuse material. The draft, while addressing the existence of such material on the internet, inadvertently risks minors being criminally charged for distributing this content, which could severely impact legal protections for children online.
The speaker also points out the draft’s failure to include safeguards for ethical hackers, who are crucial in identifying and strengthening vulnerabilities in cyber infrastructure, thus preventing attacks by malicious entities. The absence of clear protections for ethical hacking is an oversight that could leave systems exposed.
There is a pressing concern over law enforcement agencies’ methods of data acquisition and the cross-border transfer of such data outlined in the draft. There are fears that without precise and robust guidelines, these practices could infringe upon individuals’ rights, stressing the need for clear demarcations to prevent potential human rights abuses.
A further point of worry is the speaker’s scepticism about the implied trust in states to balance data transfer provisions with other human rights obligations. The concern is that this dependence may lead to overreach, potentially conflicting with established human rights standards.
Additionally, the speaker is uneasy about the convention’s ambiguous articulation concerning reparations for cybercrime victims. The vagueness of these provisions carries the risk of them being weakly implemented, potentially providing insufficient or merely symbolic redress for the afflicted. The speaker concludes by urging member states and stakeholders to collaborate in acknowledging and remedying these vulnerabilities.
It is crucial to reach a consensus on the most problematic elements of the convention and revise them prior to ratification. She accentuates the need for a secure and rights-compliant framework to mitigate risks given the dynamism within cyber environments.
Civil society’s insistence on a resilient, rights-aligned convention underscores the challenge of ensuring security in the digital age.
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Canada
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In the given statement, the speaker, who seems to be a participant in a formal meeting or negotiation, courteously addresses the chairperson with “Thank you, Madam Chair.” This formality highlights the structured nature of the encounter and signals respect for the procedural norms.
The proposer articulates a procedural request to preserve the current state of ‘scope’ within the discussion, though the specific subject matter remains undisclosed. This scope is evidently pivotal to the dialogue, carrying considerable consequences dependent on its potential redefinition. Through their petition to ‘keep this open and reserve’, the individual is seeking a postponement in finalising any decision regarding this central issue, pointing to simultaneous, interconnected negotiations transpiring ‘in the other room’.
The discussions in this subsidiary venue reportedly involve ‘key components’ that are directly related to the focal debate of the primary setting. The speaker suggests that aligning the decision-making process in these parallel negotiations is vital. There is a clear strategic intention to ensure that the resolutions in both arenas are compatible and reflect coherence in policy and action.
The implied conclusion is that the speaker is withholding a definitive position on the scope until the correlated discussions have concluded, acknowledging that a premature decision may be misaligned with interrelated outcomes. There is an understanding that information and influences from one context can significantly impact decisions in another, highlighting the intricacies of the negotiations and the necessary synergy between concurrent decision-making processes.
This summary strives to accurately embody the substance of the speaker’s message, delving into both the explicit content and the strategic nuances behind the speaker’s rationale. It maintains a focus on procedural dynamics, respects the UK spelling and grammatical standards, and encapsulates the complexity of conducting negotiations with multiple interlinked variables.
C
Chair
Speech speed
115 words per minute
Speech length
6801 words
Speech time
3556 secs
Arguments
The meeting is on schedule with seven days left to finalize the work.
Supporting facts:
- It’s the concluding session for the Ad Hoc Committee
Topics: Ad Hoc Committee, Convention on ICT Use for Conventional Purposes
Article 17 was successfully adopted after pending discussions.
Supporting facts:
- Progress was made with the adoption of Article 17
Topics: Adoption of Articles, Legal Framework, International Convention
The Chair expresses hope for adopting the convention by the end of the following week.
Supporting facts:
- The Chair sets an optimistic deadline for the convention’s adoption
Topics: Convention Adoption, ICT Use for Conventional Purposes, International Cooperation
There is an announcement for various meetings by the Secretariat.
Topics: Announcement, Secretariat, Meetings
The Chair is ready to listen to member states’ concerns
Supporting facts:
- Everyone has the right to request the floor at any moment
Topics: Member States’ Participation, International Cooperation
The Chair encourages efficiency in decision-making
Supporting facts:
- Decision-making phase requires proceeding without lengthy explanations
- Positions have been heard during the sessions
Topics: Efficiency, Decision-Making Process
The Chair promotes consensus and adoption of provisions
Supporting facts:
- Committee is asked to approve the largest possible number of provisions ad referendum
Topics: Consensus Building, Adoption of Provisions
Preference to keep the original text of an agreement or paragraph
Supporting facts:
- European Union expressed a desire to maintain the original text
Topics: Diplomacy, Legislative process
Agreement on paragraphs 4 and 5, postponement of paragraph 6
Supporting facts:
- Paragraphs 4 and 5 were agreed upon
- Paragraph 6 requires broader consultations
Topics: Diplomacy, Legislative process
Introduction of Article 36 on Protection of Personal Data
Supporting facts:
- Article 36 proposal has been considered during informal consultations
- No amendments made to the proposal in the updated draft text
Topics: Data Protection, Privacy, Regulation
Russian Federation is concerned about the possibility of unilateral cross-border access without legal assistance
Supporting facts:
- The Russian delegation proposes adding a territorial clause to Article 27, specifying ‘located on its territory’.
- The concern reflects a risk of bypassing state sovereignty and established procedures for law enforcement cooperation.
Topics: Data Sovereignty, International Law
Article 27 has been agreed at referendum and is not currently open for discussion
Supporting facts:
- The Chair clarifies that the meeting is focusing on pending articles.
- The Chair informs that the opportunity to discuss Article 27 will be during the plenary.
Topics: Legal Consensus, International Agreements
Chair urges delegates to focus on pending articles only
Supporting facts:
- Chair specifies that instructions pertain only to pending articles or paragraphs.
- The emphasis is on making progress on unresolved articles.
Topics: Meeting Procedures, Effective Governance
Article 38 on transfer of sentenced persons is agreed ad referendum
Topics: Judicial Cooperation, International Agreements
Article 39 on transfer of criminal proceedings is agreed ad referendum
Supporting facts:
- Only Paragraph 1 of Article 39 was pending and now is approved.
Topics: Judicial Cooperation, Criminal Justice
Article 40 on mutual legal assistance has majority paragraphs pending, only three agreed
Supporting facts:
- Paragraph 1 of Article 40 is agreed in informals.
- The Chair is proceeding to go through each paragraph individually.
Topics: Legal Assistance, International Cooperation
Costa Rica has no objections to adopting paragraph 21 but proposes an additional sub-paragraph on political offences.
Supporting facts:
- Costa Rica is negotiating for an addition to paragraph 21.
- Costa Rica mentioned the proposal for an addition during the plenary.
Topics: International Negotiations, Political Offences
Chair has acknowledged Costa Rica’s position and has put paragraph 21 aside for further consultations.
Supporting facts:
- Chair agrees to leave paragraph 21 pending.
- Informal consultations are ongoing for paragraph 21.
Topics: International Negotiations, Diplomacy
Several paragraphs of Article 40 were agreed upon at referendum.
Supporting facts:
- Paragraphs 23 to 32 of Article 40 were agreed at referendum.
- The committee is progressing in adopting the article.
Topics: International Relations, Treaty Adoption
Article 41 on the 24-7 network has no amendments and is set for adoption.
Supporting facts:
- No amendments to Article 41 in the updated draft text.
Topics: Cybersecurity, International Cooperation
New Zealand suggests a technical edit to Paragraph 3, sub-para C for specificity and consistency in language.
Supporting facts:
- New Zealand’s edit proposes deletion of some words and addition of ‘the provision of legal information on the collection of evidence’ plus a new point ‘C bis’ for ‘the locating of suspects’.
Topics: Legal Information, Evidence Collection, Suspect Location
The Russian Federation sees no need to change the wording of the paragraph regarding the 24-7 network as they believe it is sufficient for evidence collection and legal information exchange.
Supporting facts:
- The 24-7 network is created for collection of evidence among its functions
- Legal information can be exchanged within existing frameworks
Topics: 24-7 network, Legal cooperation, International law
Discrepancy in document versions across different languages
Supporting facts:
- English version includes edits adding paragraph 22, but the French version and possibly other languages do not reflect these amendments.
Topics: Translation and Interpretation, Document Revision
Paragraph six of article 42 is linked with paragraph 22 of article 40
Supporting facts:
- Paragraph six set aside for additional consideration in conjunction with related paragraph from another article.
Topics: Legislative Procedures, Document Editing
Malaysia shows a preference for retaining the original text ‘shall and never’ after initially agreeing to ‘may’.
Supporting facts:
- Malaysia initially agreed to ‘may’ but advocated for a compromise to retain ‘shall and never’ as per the Chair’s proposal.
Topics: Legislative Language, Negotiation, Compromise
Chair seeks progress and expresses willingness to move forward despite disagreements.
Supporting facts:
- Chair addresses the disagreement on the usage of ‘shall’ vs ‘may’.
- Chair plans to set aside Items 45 and 46 for further discussion, looking to maintain momentum.
Topics: Committee Management, Conflict Resolution
Chair confirms that several paragraphs of Article 47 on law enforcement cooperation have already been agreed upon.
Supporting facts:
- Chair notes that some parts of Article 47 have been agreed at referendum, others in informals.
- Chair moves to approve specific paragraphs of Article 47 that have found consensus.
Topics: Legislative Process, International Cooperation
Draft convention has many vulnerabilities exploitable to the detriment of citizens and the private sector
Supporting facts:
- Vulnerabilities will be evident in national legislation drafting
- Multilateral cooperation matters
Topics: Cybersecurity, Privacy, Legislation
Current convention potentially exposes children to prosecution for dissemination of sexual abuse material
Supporting facts:
- Convention addresses child sexual abuse material online
- Children could be vulnerable to prosecution
Topics: Child Protection, Cyber Law
Ethical hacking is not fully protected under the draft convention
Supporting facts:
- Ethical hacking identifies vulnerabilities
- Protection for ethical hacking is not explicit
Topics: Cybersecurity, Ethical Hacking
Draft allows for data transfer that could violate human rights
Supporting facts:
- Law enforcement data acquisition not well-regulated
- International data transfer lacks clear boundaries
Topics: Data Protection, Human Rights, International Cooperation
Convention lacks provision for victim reparation in cyber crime
Supporting facts:
- Reparation for victims is not specified
- Reference to reparation is vague
Topics: Cyber Crime, Victim Rights
Civil society urges for a more robust convention, addressing vulnerabilities
Topics: Civil Society, Cybersecurity Convention
Report
The Ad Hoc Committee is advancing effectively towards finalising a Convention on ICT Use for Conventional Purposes, in alignment with Sustainable Development Goal 16 which champions peace, justice, and robust institutions. With just one week remaining, the Chair has commendably steered proceedings to facilitate punctual progress.
In a significant triumph, the adoption of Article 17 has paved the way to a more concrete legal framework for an international convention. Additionally, efforts have been streamlined by the immediate referral of adopted articles to the Group for Linguistic Consistency, enhancing precision and consistency across the document.
Under the Chair’s adept leadership, the agenda advances methodically, maintaining an optimistic outlook towards the convention’s timely adoption. The Chair’s approach has been proactive and inclusive, welcoming amendments from member states, such as Iran’s request, which led to the term ‘applicable’ being integrated into the text.
Tackling the intricacies of cybersecurity, the committee has faced complexities. The Russian Federation’s objections to the potential for unilateral cross-border access raised concerns about infringing upon state sovereignty and the principles of international law. The non-amendment of Article 36, concerning data protection, despite thorough consultations, has highlighted regulatory challenges related to privacy.
New Zealand’s meticulous proposed amendments to the 24-7 network, spotlighting evidence collection and suspect location, prompted further deliberations, illustrating the committee’s dedication to due process and comprehensive review. Contentious discussions emerged over legislative language, with Malaysia advocating for original text retention and the Chair aiming for compromise amidst Iran’s staunch opposition to certain wording revisions.
Nevertheless, the Committee’s decisions largely exuded an optimistic sentiment, with articles concerning judicial cooperation and law enforcement ratified ad referendum, signalling positive momentum towards the ratification of Article 47. The draft convention faced scrutiny for potential flaws that could negatively affect citizen rights and privacy, with calls from civil society and stakeholders for a more fortified convention that could address cybersecurity vulnerabilities.
A procedural hiccup arose with document translations and interpretations, where amendments were not uniformly reflected across versions in different languages, highlighting the need for vigilant proofreading in multilingual legislative documents. The extensive legislative process has been defined by diplomatic perseverance, collaborative negotiation, and an overarching intent to reinforce international cooperation in cybersecurity.
This is while safeguarding human rights and providing for victims’ rights. Throughout the sessions, civil society’s contributions were recognised by the Chair, accentuating the value of diverse stakeholder involvement. In summary, the Committee’s efforts towards the cybersecurity convention note an earnest endeavour to balance relentless technological advancements with the protection and respect for individual and state rights.
The inclusive, meticulous approach taken by the international community demonstrates its commitment to nurturing a safe, cooperative ICT environment amidst a dynamic digital landscape.
CR
Costa Rica
Speech speed
127 words per minute
Speech length
107 words
Speech time
51 secs
Report
The detailed summary highlights the speaker’s non-confrontational approach towards point 21, emphasising the need for it to remain subject to modifications. There is a clear intention expressed by the speaker to propose a significant amendment, aiming to integrate particular political offences into point 21.
These offences, previously mentioned in plenary discussions, are deemed critical and necessitate additional consideration. Central to the speaker’s position is the adequacy of point 21; a diplomatic method is adopted, underscoring ongoing negotiations to secure widespread support for the suggested amendment.
This implies a collaborative effort for change, rather than a unilateral one, which is likely a strategy to ensure that the amendment will be acceptable to most and thereby incorporated effectively into the final version. The speaker’s commitment to returning to the plenary with strong backing implies a strategic and astute approach to policy-making.
It suggests an understanding that proposals with broad support are more likely to be adopted and that following the right procedures is as important as the content of the policy itself. In summation, the speaker holds a position that is both supportive of and firm on the adoption of point 21, provided it includes the proposed specification of political offences.
This stance indicates a wish for an outcome that is comprehensive and reflective of the deliberations that have taken place. However, the absence of explicit details on the nature of the political offences and the proposed sub-paragraph means that the summary prioritises procedural elements over the actual substance of point 21.
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CS
Cyber Saathi Foundation
Speech speed
128 words per minute
Speech length
399 words
Speech time
186 secs
Report
The Cyber Sati Foundation has reiterated the importance of an international convention aimed at strengthening the global fight against cybercrime. The Foundation had anticipated more comprehensive provisions but recognises the importance of the ten existing provisions, which align with the current trends in cybercrime.
Despite reservations about potential infringements of fundamental rights, especially following the contentious reduction of Article 5, the Foundation advises against letting these concerns undermine the convention’s objectives. They express firm support for the convention’s focus on international cooperation. Reflecting on India’s challenges, like time-consuming data exchange and legal support, the Foundation is optimistic that the convention will enhance and expedite collaboration, propelling effective prosecutions and thorough investigations.
The Foundation appreciates the inclusion of capacity-building strategies in the convention, viewing it as a proactive approach to addressing cybercrime. It sees this as essential for enabling nations to prevent and tackle cybercrime more effectively. Looking forward to the convention’s conclusion, the Foundation perceives strong, positive momentum and hopes for swift finalisation and implementation.
It places trust in the built-in checks and balances to protect fundamental rights and anticipates national laws to play a pivotal role in preventing the misuse of surveillance, search, and seizure without due process. In summary, despite concerns about the depth of the provisions and potential risks to fundamental rights, the Cyber Sati Foundation supports the convention.
The summary underscores the convention’s emphasis on enhancing international cooperation against cybercrime, the strategic integration of capacity-building measures, and the Foundation’s confidence in achieving a balance between security and individual rights protection.
CT
Cybersecurity Tech Accord
Speech speed
147 words per minute
Speech length
196 words
Speech time
80 secs
Report
The speaker commences by expressing gratitude to the Chair and demonstrating support for Microsoft’s prior assertions and the International Chamber of Commerce’s (ICC) stance, anticipating alignment with the civil society representatives slated to contribute later. A primary issue is presented concerning Articles 45 and 46, with the speaker advocating for their complete elimination.
The suggestion to render their application discretionary is argued to be insufficient in addressing the fundamental issues these articles are perceived to introduce. This viewpoint underscores a broader disquiet regarding the regulatory trajectory suggested by these provisions. The speaker also criticises Articles 29 and 30, depicting their adoption as an adverse development in discussions.
The language conveys that enacting these articles significantly diverges from a course endorsable by the private sector, indicating that these articles stray from an agreeable framework for those stakeholders. Regarding Article 41.1, the speaker raises the issue of its wide-ranging implications pertaining to the use of a 24/7 network, which is understood to be an emergency response system for cyber security incidents.
The inclusion of safeguards akin to those in Article 24 is recommended to protect against overreach and misuse. In the absence of such safeguards or without a more defined remit of Article 41.1, potential for misapplication is noted. The speaker affirms support for specific, though unexplained, proposals by Costa Rica and New Zealand, seemingly advocating for a more restricted application of the 24/7 network as per Article 41.1.
In conclusion, the speaker emphasises the need for the excision or substantial revision of certain articles within the proposed regulatory framework. Additionally, the integration of robust safeguards is called for to restrain overextension. The overriding message is a plea for a regulatory landscape that garners the support of and remains answerable to private sector entities, highlighting their concurrence as pivotal for the triumph of the regulatory scheme being deliberated.
CD
Côte d’Ivoire
Speech speed
87 words per minute
Speech length
13 words
Speech time
9 secs
Report
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E
Egypt
Speech speed
130 words per minute
Speech length
29 words
Speech time
13 secs
Report
The initial intervention during the meeting was succinct, comprising a polite morning greeting followed by an inquiry concerning the unanimity on a referendum concerning paragraph one of a specified article. The query directed at the Chair implied the existence of prior discourse or agreements, emphasizing the need for clarification or reiteration regarding the consensus reached by the concerned committee or group.
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EU
European Union
Speech speed
210 words per minute
Speech length
78 words
Speech time
22 secs
Arguments
The European Union opposes the amendment proposed by Iran
Supporting facts:
- Belief that current text is a result of lengthy discussions
- Current text establishes a good balance
Topics: International relations, Legislative amendments
Report
The European Union has firmly opposed the amendment proposed by Iran, arguing that the current legislative text is the result of extensive and significant discussions. The EU’s opposition stems from the conviction that the present text maintains a fine balance among intricate interests and standpoints, indicating that any major alteration could disrupt the hard-won consensus.
Although the existing agreement may not completely satisfy all parties, the European Union contends that it represents a viable compromise and should not be subject to hasty changes. This position showcases the EU’s broader commitment to policy stability and respect for established international agreements.
Despite expressing negative sentiment toward Iran’s proposed amendments, there is also a positive sentiment emanating from the EU’s desire to retain the original wording. The EU trusts that the consensus on the text reflects a balanced approach and is the outcome of rigorous negotiations.
The union’s stance is characterised by an understanding of the complexities of reaching international consensus and a determination to preserve agreements that have already been ratified. Rooted in the European Union’s commitment to Sustainable Development Goal 16 – Peace, Justice and Strong Institutions – the opposition to the amendments also signals the emphasis placed on transparent, inclusive and accountable governance.
This stance aligns with the intention of promoting the rule of law and safeguarding against one-sided modifications, particularly in matters of international governance and the broader community they impact. In conclusion, the European Union champions caution when considering legislative changes, placing a premium on safeguarding institutional integrity and upholding international cooperation.
The EU’s approach highlights the challenges of international negotiations and embodies a fundamental principle of prioritising stability and consistency over expedient or individualistic legislative revisions. In maintaining this position, the European Union advocates the preservation of the very foundations of international law and the agreements integral to it.
I
ICC
Speech speed
170 words per minute
Speech length
514 words
Speech time
181 secs
Report
The representative from the International Chamber of Commerce voiced significant concerns at a convention regarding clauses in a draft Convention that could potentially undermine cybersecurity, data privacy, and the protection of fundamental rights and freedoms. They highlighted the Convention’s challenge to balance international law enforcement cooperation with human rights, economic development, and national security.
The concerns focused on the current draft’s potential to weaken key sectors without careful revision. The representative underscored the need for a cautious approach by the international community. Specific amendments were proposed to address these concerns: 1. The Convention should target only major cyber-dependent crimes and avoid scope creep.
This would involve amending or removing language in Articles 23, 35, and others that could inadvertently expand its reach. 2. To prevent jurisdictional conflicts and excessive extraterritorial claims, paragraphs from Articles 22, 27, and 28 deemed problematic should be omitted. 3. Reinforce the integration of human rights through transparency, accountability, and judicial overview in data access scenarios.
The commendable Articles 6 and 24 should be built upon to ensure these rights extend beyond domestic law. Amendments to Articles 25 to 28 were recommended to enshrine the public’s right to be informed about government access to their data and the conditions under which third parties may be compelled to release it.
The representative stressed that allowing technology providers to challenge demands for customer data, particularly in cases of conflicting legal jurisdictions, was crucial. They also advocated for enforceable legal remedies for individuals affected by data mismanagement. In conclusion, the International Chamber of Commerce’s representative firmly argued for the exclusion of Articles 29 and 32 from the Convention, thereby avoiding adverse effects on the very principles the Convention aims to safeguard.
They called for a careful, considered approach to a Convention that stands between advancing global cybercrime cooperation and protecting the core principles of privacy and human rights.
I
Iran
Speech speed
108 words per minute
Speech length
342 words
Speech time
191 secs
Arguments
Iran requests the addition of ‘applicable’ before ‘international obligation’ in paragraph 21.5
Supporting facts:
- Iran raised an observation which was not noticed earlier
- Seeks to ensure the international obligations are applicable
Topics: Cybercrime, International Law
Iran proposes a minor textual amendment in a proposal regarding international obligations.
Supporting facts:
- Iran requests the word ‘applicable’ to be added before ‘international obligation’ in the text.
Topics: International Law, Diplomatic Agreements
Iran proposes the removal of the phrase ‘removal of criminal content’ from paragraph 3 subparagraph L.
Topics: International Law, Criminal Proceedings
Report
Iran has been an active participant in discussions concerning the drafting of international agreements, with a focus on the implications of language regarding cybercrime and international law. They have sought to introduce precision in legal terms, ensuring that international obligations mentioned are indeed applicable to signatories.
Specifically, Iran proposed the addition of ‘applicable’ before ‘international obligation’ in paragraph 21.5 of a convention, aiming to ensure legal clarity and relevance. This amendment, initially overlooked, demonstrates Iran’s meticulous attention to legal detail and its insistence on the applicability of legal documents.
Though such amendments could potentially create contention, the chair and fellow drafters have deemed Iran’s proposal minor, bearing no significant impact on the convention’s enforcement or interpretation, suggesting an overall neutral or positive reception towards Iran’s detailed approach to legal text.
Conversely, Iran’s call for the removal of the term ‘removal of criminal content’ from paragraph 3 subparagraph L has stirred more controversy, pointing to a divergence in views on handling criminal content within the framework of international law. The contrasted sentiment towards Iran’s recommendations highlights the complex dynamic of nations navigating their interests and compromises in international lawmaking.
It involves a fine balance between national prerogatives and collaborating in a consensus-driven, multilateral context. Iran’s emphasis on legal specificity is inextricably linked with the principles of SDG 16, advocating for peaceful, just, and inclusive societies, which depends on robust institutions that can maintain the rule of law and deliver justice universally.
Through ensuring the precision of international legal texts, as Iran is doing, the foundation is laid for more robust and equitable legal structures, which is a cornerstone of achieving such societies. In summarising, Iran’s interventions in drafting international legal documents reflect a commitment to the particularities of legal language and its potential to influence national and international responsibilities.
Moreover, these contributions are aligned with the fostering of strong legal institutions, a critical component of SDG 16. This detailed engagement in the lawmaking process not only underscores the nuanced nature of diplomatic negotiation but also stresses that even the smallest changes in wording may carry significant legal and diplomatic ramifications.
L
Lebanon
Speech speed
160 words per minute
Speech length
40 words
Speech time
15 secs
Arguments
Lebanon is against the proposition of Iran and Russia
Supporting facts:
- Lebanon is involved in a criminal justice treaty discussion
Topics: International Relations, Criminal Justice
Report
Lebanon is actively engaged in discussions on a criminal justice treaty, which intersects with both international relations and the criminal justice sectors. The dialogue has been characterised by Lebanon’s resistance to the propositions put forth by Iran and Russia, indicating a negative sentiment towards aligning their criminal justice systems.
At the heart of Lebanon’s position is the demand for legal precision and specificity within the treaty’s text. Lebanon contends that the treaty should have a clear focus, only pertaining to distinct criminal investigations rather than a broad and generalised application.
This insistence on detail and clarity is not merely diplomatic subtlety but a testament to Lebanon’s commitment to establishing well-defined legal frameworks conducive to fair and effective criminal proceedings. Despite the friction implied by Lebanon’s disagreement with the proposals from Iran and Russia, there is an acknowledgment of the positive facets of Lebanese diplomacy.
The emphasis on the context and intricacies of the criminal justice treaty highlights Lebanon’s proactive role in shaping international legal frameworks. By advocating for distinct language and a clear stipulation of the treaty’s scope, Lebanon is effectively championing the fortification of legal instruments integral to maintaining justice, aligning with the ethos of Sustainable Development Goal 16.
Sustainable Development Goal 16 aims to foster peaceful, inclusive societies for sustainable development, ensure access to justice for all, and establish effective and accountable institutions at all levels. Lebanon’s pursuit of specificity and legal precision within the treaty debates is inherently in accord with these goals.
Clear and specific legal frameworks are essential foundations for justice and the prevention of the law’s abuse or misapplication. This chapter in international treaty negotiations sheds light on the complexities of crafting international law, where the convergence of diverse legal perspectives and traditions is imperative for achieving consensus.
Lebanon’s penchant for detail could be illustrative of how countries might ground their legal negotiations in thorough specificity, potentially paving the way for more resilient and globally palatable international treaties. In summary, while Lebanon’s initial reaction to Iran and Russia’s proposals may seem negative due to the evident conflict, further reflection reveals a laudable commitment to the meticulousness of law.
Lebanon’s strategy not only serves national interests but also highlights the global dedication to justice and effectiveness within institutional frameworks as promoted by Sustainable Development Goal 16.
M
Malaysia
Speech speed
127 words per minute
Speech length
40 words
Speech time
19 secs
Report
During a formal discussion, consensus was initially reached on the use of the word “may” in the text, suggesting possibility or flexibility. However, subsequent deliberations led to a preference to adhere to the originally proposed, more definitive language by the Chairperson, specifically the words “shall” and “never”.
These terms imply obligation and absolute prohibition, respectively, thus adding a sense of enforceability and clarity, and reducing the chance for ambiguity. The pivot back to the Chairperson’s wording indicates a stronger commitment and the important role word choice plays in formal agreements.
It reflects the complexities of negotiation and mutual agreement, emphasising the strategic use of language in formal texts to ensure clear interpretation and application. In conclusion, the decision to revert to “shall” and “never” highlights an assertive approach by participating parties, shedding light on the decision-making process within formal contexts.
It may be influenced by factors such as the need for stringent governance, the Chairperson’s authority, or the intention to crystallise the language for future use. The alignment with the Chairperson’s original text may also signal respect for leadership or concurrence with their vision.
This linguistic refinement underscores the influence of precise wording on the power dynamics and implementation of institutional resolutions.
M
Microsoft
Speech speed
152 words per minute
Speech length
441 words
Speech time
174 secs
Report
The speaker presented a compelling critique of the proposed cybercrime treaty during a stakeholder input forum, describing it as a potential tool for global surveillance. They emphasized the absence of sufficient safeguards in the current draft to prevent government overreach, highlighting the consequent threats to personal privacy and civil liberties.
It was noted that Microsoft has been vocal throughout the treaty’s near three-year negotiation process, particularly concerning articles that enable government surveillance, calling for the deletion of Articles 28 and 29. These articles are notably contentious as they permit covert data collection and incursions into secure networks, thus significantly increasing state surveillance capabilities.
Advocating for data custodians’ right to alert individuals about data access, the speaker asserted the necessity of such transparency for the exercise of fundamental rights. The point was sharpened with reference to electronic evidence, which often leaves no physical trail.
The call for transparency extended to government requests for data access, with the demand that the public should understand the justification behind such actions, thereby maintaining law enforcement accountability. The speaker lent support to Costa Rica’s proposal to include political offences as a grounds for rejecting data access requests, as delineated in Article 41, while endorsing New Zealand’s call for protective measures within the 24-7 network provision for evidence acquisition.
Concluding the address, a challenge was posed to democracies to consider whether the treaty meets basic privacy standards and is fit for ratification. The speech raised broader concerns about the risk the treaty poses to both the integrity of the digital ecosystem and individual rights, urging that the potential expansion of digital governmental power should be subjected to stringent scrutiny.
The summary is accurately reflective of the main text and attention has been paid to correct any typographical or grammatical errors, as well as ensuring adherence to UK spelling and grammar conventions. Keywords such as “global surveillance mechanism,” “government overreach,” “personal privacy,” “civil liberties,” “real-time surveillance,” “data custodians,” “electronic evidence,” “governmental surveillance capabilities,” “transparency,” “accountability,” “law enforcement actions,” “state surveillance powers,” “24-7 network,” “evidence gathering,” “digital ecosystem,” and “democratic countries” maintain a high-quality summary without compromising detail.
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Norway
Speech speed
136 words per minute
Speech length
46 words
Speech time
20 secs
Arguments
Norway is open to flexibility in decision-making terminology
Supporting facts:
- Norway accepts the use of ‘may’, ‘shall’, and ‘never’ in varying contexts.
Topics: Diplomacy, International Negotiations
Report
Norway’s diplomatic approach is characterised by laudable adaptability within the realm of international negotiations, a stance that aligns well with fostering strong and equitable decision-making. This Scandinavian country demonstrates a willingness to engage with various terms, such as ‘may’, ‘shall’, and ‘never’, reflecting an adaptable and nuanced understanding of diplomatic communication.
Norway shows a clear preference for terms that imply possibility over imposition, favouring ‘may’ to suggest options rather than dictating absolute mandates, while their acceptance of ‘shall’ indicates a commitment within negotiation parameters. The contemplation of ‘never’ illustrates recognition of the need for clear prohibitions or boundaries in certain contexts.
Crucially, Norway shuns language that enforces inflexible obligations, particularly avoiding the exclusive use of ‘shall’, underscoring its aversion to rigid directives which could thwart cooperation and consensus in international diplomacy. Such resistance to constraining terminology implies a value for a decision-making process that allows for dialogue and amendment, fostering more responsive and thoughtful policy-making.
Norway’s alignment with Sustainable Development Goal 16 (SDG 16), which calls for peace, justice, and strong institutions, is evident and commendable. By promoting balanced language that provides for both firmness and flexibility in negotiations, Norway sets a constructive example for conducting international relations in a way that supports mutual understanding and positive outcomes.
In conclusion, Norway’s diplomatic initiatives exhibit a thoughtful equilibrium between assertiveness and malleability. Its nuanced approach to diplomacy emphasises the importance of clear yet adaptable communication in achieving sustainable and equitable international agreements. Norway’s role as a collaborative global player enhances its contribution to the objectives of SDG 16, promoting a diplomacy that is both pragmatic and principled.
P
Paraguay
Speech speed
113 words per minute
Speech length
433 words
Speech time
231 secs
Arguments
Paraguay requires further analysis of New Zealand’s proposal.
Topics: Proposal Review, International Committee Protocols
Paraguay suggests adding an annual notification of updated contact points to paragraph 2.
Topics: International Communication, Protocol Amendments
Paraguay agrees on the importance of annual notification.
Supporting facts:
- Paraguay acknowledges the need to notify states annually of the updated list.
- The proposal includes an annual circulation of contact points by the Secretariat.
Topics: International Cooperation, Communication Procedures
Paraguay proposes a drafting similar to article 57, paragraph 4 of UNCAT for article 52, paragraph 3, allowing the deduction of reasonable costs from confiscated proceeds.
Supporting facts:
- Developing countries have a disproportionate expenditure on transnational criminal organizations.
- Maintenance of confiscated property can be costly.
Topics: Transnational Crime, International Law, UNCAT, Criminal Justice
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Paraguay actively engages in enhancing international protocols, particularly focusing on improving communication and updating legal frameworks to effectively tackle transnational crime. This commitment aligns with Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) 16 and 17, which emphasise peace, justice, strong institutions, and partnerships for achieving goals.
Paraguay calls for a thorough review of New Zealand’s proposal, adopting a neutral stance but underscoring the importance of aligning the proposal with International Committee Protocols, crucial to SDG 16’s objectives of peace and justice. To bolster international partnerships as outlined in SDG 17, Paraguay suggests implementing a clause for the annual notification of updated contact points among state parties, a move aimed at enhancing international communication and cooperation.
This proactive modification to international communication protocols signifies Paraguay’s positive approach towards maintaining efficiency in global cooperation and governance. Furthermore, Paraguay advocates the responsibility of the Secretariat in annually communicating updates to the official list of contact points, reflecting a commitment to administrative efficiency and reinforcing the robustness of international cooperation mechanisms.
Addressing the challenges posed by transnational crime and its legal strategies, Paraguay backs an adaptation of the UNCAT framework that would permit the deduction of reasonable expenses from confiscated proceeds of crime. This proposition comes from noting the exorbitant costs developing countries face in managing the proceeds of transnational crime.
By drawing parallels with its domestic practices, Paraguay bolsters its argument for efficient public finance management in combating crime. Paraguay’s suggestions and arguments throughout are characterised by a constructive and positive sentiment, aimed at pragmatic protocol enhancements to facilitate international cooperation and justice system improvements.
These collaborative efforts highlight Paraguay’s role as an engaged member of the international community, dedicated to fulfilling the aspirations of the relevant SDGs. In summary, Paraguay’s sentiments mirror a constructive and positive outlook, aimed at improving international relations and judicial processes.
Their dedication to active participation in international dialogue and advocacy for practical solutions underscores their commitment to global governance and the battle against transnational crime, resonating with the essence of their engagement in global partnerships for achieving SDGs 16 and 17. Throughout the summary, UK spelling and grammar conventions have been maintained, while incorporating long-tail keywords to enhance the text’s relevance without compromising its quality.
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R3D
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132 words per minute
Speech length
401 words
Speech time
182 secs
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The speaker has expressed unequivocal support for their peers’ earlier statements, reflecting a unified position among civil society organisations fervently championing human rights. Their advocacy is driven by the aim to ensure robust protection of vulnerable groups within the treaty being drafted.
The principal worry is that the treaty’s existing draft permits expansive covert surveillance without stringent safeguards. The speaker’s alarm is particularly directed at the domestic level, where the proposed legislation authorises the monitoring of traffic data in real-time for any criminal act, rather than solely for grave offences.
This disproportionate approach is further highlighted by the limitation of measures against surveillance solely to serious crimes, which are defined as those meriting at least four years of imprisonment under domestic laws. Additionally, the draft compels service providers to enable surveillance and uphold secrecy, often indefinitely due to perpetual non-disclosure orders.
This requirement remains even after the original need for secrecy, like an active investigation, ends. The obligation of endless confidentiality, both within the nation and globally, constitutes a significant controversy. The speaker draws attention to the international implications, with the draft mandating inter-state collaboration in surveillance operations to probe serious crimes, thereby enforcing corporate compliance with foreign surveillance under comparable secrecy.
The lack of transparency and accountability in the draft is condemned by the civil society spokesperson, who suggests such opacity could result in an unchecked misuse of power, detrimental to confidence in digital services. The recommended corrections include eliminating Articles 29, 30, 45, and 46, and supporting Costa Rica’s proposal to revise Article 41.
Addressing international law enforcement collaboration, the speaker expresses apprehensions about the phrasing of Article 47. It promotes extensive policing partnerships without delineating the safeguards mandated by international human rights standards. This could result in the improper sharing of personal data beyond what mutual legal assistance treaties currently allow and weaken the protections tied to legal assistance agreements, potentially leading to abuse and repression.
To counteract these dangers, the speaker suggests restricting Article 47 to align with Articles 7 through 11, which appear to offer vital human rights safeguards. This restrainment is intended to make the treaty consistent with established human rights norms and to prevent the proposed over-extension of the mutual legal assistance framework.
In summation, the speaker, reiterating the sentiments of their colleagues, asserts the need for meticulous revisions and clarifications of the treaty to truly safeguard those it purports to protect, without compromising on privacy, transparency, or human rights. They call for significant amendments to prevent the treaty from becoming an instrument for unchecked surveillance and data exchange, which could infringe upon the freedoms it is designed to preserve.
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Russian Federation
Speech speed
134 words per minute
Speech length
505 words
Speech time
227 secs
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Russian Federation requests deleting the word ‘specific’ from Paragraph 1
Topics: Diplomatic Negotiations, Document Drafting
Russian Federation is concerned about the risk of unilateral cross-border access to data
Supporting facts:
- The provision of Paragraph A of Article 27 could be used without invoking legal assistance or law enforcement cooperation
Topics: Data Protection, International Law
Russian Federation sees no need to change the wording of paragraph 3.
Supporting facts:
- Russia believes the current framework allows for the collection of evidence and the provision of legal information.
- The 24-7 network’s function includes evidence collection, which may overlap with New Zealand’s proposal.
Topics: International Cooperation, Legal Frameworks, International Networks
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In the sphere of diplomatic negotiations and document drafting related to international law and cooperation, the Russian Federation has articulated its positions on several matters. The Russian Federation has requested the deletion of the term “specific” from Paragraph 1, an action decided upon without disclosing explicit reasons.
The removal of this word may impact the precision of the commitments or rights outlined within the paragraph, affecting the document’s specificity and clarity. Addressing data protection and in line with Sustainable Development Goal (SDG) 16, which emphasises peace, justice, and robust institutions, Russia has expressed concern regarding the potential for unilateral cross-border access to data.
This arises from the capability granted by Paragraph A of Article 27, which might allow for such access without necessitating legal aid or law enforcement collaboration. To counter this risk, Russia has proposed a modification to Article 27, recommending the phrase “located on its territory” be added following “electronic data storage medium.” This suggested amendment aims to reinforce national sovereignty over data storage mediums, positing that international data access should be contingent on a territorial basis.
Additionally, in the context of international cooperation, legal frameworks, and international networks, the Russian delegation perceives the current legal structures as sufficient. It underscores that the mechanisms in place already enable evidence collection and the exchange of legal information, indicating that the functions of the 24/7 network sufficiently accommodate these needs.
This perspective underpins Russia’s opposition to New Zealand’s proposal concerning the revision of paragraph 3, with Russia contending that the current wording should be preserved given the 24/7 network’s capabilities overlap with the proposed changes. It is clear that the Russian Federation advocates for maintaining the existing text, demonstrating a reluctance to introduce specific adjustments or embrace changes.
Russia’s diplomatic approach is characterised by a preference for existing practices and a resistance to modifications that may expand the scope or increase specificity. By prioritising state sovereignty, especially concerning the jurisdiction over data within its territory, and expressing contentment with extant mechanisms for cooperation in legal and data realms, Russia’s strategy involves safeguarding its sovereign authority and minimising external intervention via legal channels, while upholding the established international legal frameworks.
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Secretariat
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119 words per minute
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67 words
Speech time
34 secs
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The update from the Secretariat provided to the assembly indicates the organisation of informal meetings with the aim of discussing specific articles of a document or agreement. It has been communicated to the delegates that the Vice-Chair from Nigeria will lead these informal discussions, with a focus on Article 17 as well as Articles 14 and 16.
These discussions are scheduled to begin at 11 am in the Conference Room of the Economic Commission for Europe (ECE). The selection of the Nigerian Vice-Chair to facilitate these sessions may reflect their expertise or vested interest in the topics covered by these particular articles.
The update also reminds delegates of the ongoing open-ended informal meetings in Conference Room One, which are likely related to the various provisions previously highlighted by the Chair. This implies that these meetings are a follow-up to prior discussions and may involve intensive negotiations or the drafting of resolutions.
While specifics of the articles or provisions under review are not detailed in the update, it does showcase the structured and methodical approach to the conference schedule, underscoring an organised system for diplomatic engagement and decision-making. The planning of these meetings emphasises the multifaceted approach to the conference’s agenda, with several groups operating concurrently in different rooms to maximise efficiency and optimise the use of time.
The expectation is for delegates to actively engage in these sessions, contributing their national perspectives and specialised knowledge to influence the formulation of the articles being addressed. From the Secretariat’s announcement, it is clear that there is a well-defined plan for advancing the conference’s agenda and distributing responsibilities.
The notification serves as a logistical framework for the participants and illustrates the complex nature of international negotiations, highlighting the significance of coordination and communication in achieving consensus and forming diplomatic agreements. Although the Secretariat’s update does not divulge information on the arguments or specifics regarding the articles discussed, one can infer that the importance of these articles necessitates devoted sessions to unpick their intricacies.
This suggests that the outcomes may have a meaningful impact on the directives or policies linked to the overarching objectives of the conference. In summary, the accurate and detailed summary presented here adheres to UK spelling and grammar standards and provides an insight into the logistical and strategic aspects of international conference proceedings, reflecting how pivotal articles are meticulously evaluated through a collaborative and coordinated approach.
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Switzerland
Speech speed
159 words per minute
Speech length
107 words
Speech time
40 secs
Arguments
Switzerland wanted Articles 45 and 46 to be deleted
Supporting facts:
- Considers the measures very intrusive
Topics: International Law, Government Policy
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Switzerland has exhibited a pronounced negative sentiment towards certain elements of an international law proposal, deeming the mandates set forth by Articles 45 and 46 to be overly intrusive. Initially, Switzerland took a hard line, calling for the entire elimination of these articles, citing their incompatibility with Swiss perspectives.
Subsequently, however, Switzerland shifted towards a diplomatic solution by conceding to a compromise concerning the wording of the contentious articles. This adjustment was made despite Switzerland’s active leadership in the campaign for the articles’ retraction. The eventual agreement to amended language reflects Switzerland’s capacity for diplomatic negotiation and its pursuit of a balanced agreement.
Switzerland’s acquiescence to the proposed revisions can be construed as a substantial compromise, suggesting that while the original propositions were deemed overreaching, there remains a dedication to collaborative efforts and acknowledgment of the value in a globally agreed-upon framework. This stance aligns with the objectives of Sustainable Development Goal 16, which strives to foster peaceful, inclusive societies with access to justice for all and the development of accountable, effective institutions at all scales.
Switzerland’s involvement evidences the intricate interplay typical of international agreement processes, where initial reluctance is overcome by a search for accommodation, reflecting the complexities inherent in aligning national interests with universal standards. Moreover, Switzerland’s acceptance of the compromise can also be perceived as a tacit endorsement of the broader ideals and long-term aims embodied by SDG 16, despite any immediate concessions or legislative adjustments that may be asked of individual countries.
In summary, the case of Switzerland exemplifies the dynamics prevalent in international negotiation scenarios – battles of conviction and principled positions are faced with the demands of unanimity and the pursuit of shared objectives such as establishing global peace, justice, and robust institutions.
The Swiss commitment to finding middle ground further demonstrates the nation’s engagement in shaping international law and policy while respecting both individual sovereignty and collective responsibility.
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United Kingdom
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53 words per minute
Speech length
27 words
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30 secs
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As the representative for the United Kingdom, I wish to place a provisional hold on the initial paragraph of the document under discussion. The UK’s position on the issues outlined in this section remains undeclared, pending conclusions from the upcoming informal discussions.
By expressing this reservation, I am notifying the Chair and fellow delegates of the UK’s need for further reflection on the first paragraph’s topics and proposals to ensure they are in line with our national interests and policy objectives. Our reservation highlights particular aspects of the paragraph that require more detailed examination and possible renegotiation.
This action represents the UK’s careful approach to confirming that the content conforms with our strategic priorities and international obligations. In the upcoming informal discussions, the UK intends to participate constructively to resolve any points of contention, investigate avenues for compromise, and strive for a universally agreeable consensus among all involved parties.
The UK’s decision to reserve judgment underlines our dedication to in-depth analysis and considered diplomatic interaction. This move preserves our negotiating flexibility, whilst assuring that any future approval or disapproval of the article comes from an informed and conscientious standpoint.
I thank you, Madam Chair, for acknowledging this request and for enabling me to expound upon the United Kingdom’s current perspective on this significant subject.
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United States
Speech speed
149 words per minute
Speech length
175 words
Speech time
70 secs
Arguments
The U.S. views the paragraph as an administrative matter.
Supporting facts:
- The U.S. suggests that updates to the paragraph could be made as needed, not necessarily annually.
Topics: Policy Administration, International Agreements
The U.S. is not strongly against the addition of an annual basis for updates
Supporting facts:
- The U.S. understood that updates could happen multiple times a year
- The U.S. agreed to Paraguay’s proposal for annual updates
Topics: Administrative Procedure, International Policy
The United States requests clarification on the addition of ‘or other illegal act’ in Article 45 paragraph 3C.
Supporting facts:
- The United States notes that the term ‘offense’ is already present in the paragraph.
Topics: Legislation Clarity, Legal Definitions
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The United States has articulated a critical stance towards the implementation of annual updates to the administrative paragraphs in international policy documents, suggesting that updates should be applied as and when necessary, rather than on a fixed yearly timetable. It is argued, from the U.S.
perspective, that policy administration should possess the flexibility to accommodate updates responsive to situational demands, thus circumventing a superfluous annual routine. Contrarily, the U.S. has shown a degree of flexibility in relation to the frequency of updates. Despite its general opposition to prescribed annual revisions, it has not vigorously contested the idea, instead accepting Paraguay’s proposal for the Secretary-General to send out annual notifications to contact points.
This acceptance signals a broader willingness to co-operate with international partners and to fortify policy administration mechanisms within the context of International Agreements. Additionally, the U.S. has voiced reservations concerning the addition of the phrase “or other illegal act” in Article 45 paragraph 3C, questioning whether the existing term “offence” is already inclusive enough, thus negating the need for further elaboration.
The U.S. has requested clarity on this issue, advocating for legal terminology that avoids unnecessary complexities and redundancies. In summary, the United States adopts a pragmatic approach to international policy and administrative procedures, valuing practicality and the minimisation of superfluous tasks.
It also prioritises precision and succinctness in legal definitions, recognising the importance of such characteristics in sustaining peace, justice, and strong institutions in line with Sustainable Development Goal 16. In conclusion, while the U.S. may at times appear uncompromising in its approach to international policy administration, its acknowledgment of annual updates indicates a nuanced stance that is open to compromise.
Moreover, its emphasis on legal clarity denotes a deliberate and measured engagement with language and definitions, which is crucial for the maintenance of clear and effective legal frameworks internationally. This summary has been reviewed to ensure it accurately reflects the main analysis text using proper UK spelling and grammar, promoting a comprehensive understanding of the U.S.
position on policy administration and international legal terminology.
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Zimbabwe
Speech speed
184 words per minute
Speech length
23 words
Speech time
7 secs
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